Rallentanda

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Friday, July 11, 2014

Toads In The Garden



Grapeling's Words for Imaginary Gardens With Real Toads
fresh burst defy  exchange customary 

the fresh sun burst  of a juicy orange
defies comparison as
a customary breakfast experience

combined with an exchange
of sleepy glances over coffee
it's a nice start to the day

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22 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 12, 2014 at 4:58 AM

    A great start to the day! And a very charming poem--bright and cheerful, thanks. k.

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  2. rallentandaJuly 12, 2014 at 7:09 AM

    You are welcome !

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  3. NatašekJuly 12, 2014 at 9:34 PM

    always a nice way to start a day.. not a fan of orange but i really want one now :)

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  4. Sumana RoyJuly 12, 2014 at 11:55 PM

    hmm...good start.. :D

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  5. avalonJuly 13, 2014 at 12:25 AM

    Pithy.

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  6. avalonJuly 13, 2014 at 12:26 AM

    I meant to write:
    Pithy and pipless.
    My keyboard has a will of its own. Pity it can be pretty mindless at times.

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  7. Anand S UnniJuly 13, 2014 at 12:33 AM

    Its not just a nice start, it is perhaps the best!

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  8. AnonymousJuly 13, 2014 at 12:46 AM

    sounds scrumptious - thanks for adding your juicy pen to the mix ~ M

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  9. MaryJuly 13, 2014 at 3:51 AM

    Your poem recounts well a delicious start to the day on two counts!

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  10. GraceJuly 13, 2014 at 4:09 AM

    I agree, nice start of the day ~ I prefer though eating fruits later as it upsets my stomach, smiles ~

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  11. Brian MillerJuly 13, 2014 at 4:35 AM

    when we lived in florida we had an orange tree in the back yard...
    used to go out there with my son and would eat until we nearly made ourselves sick...ha...they were so good though

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  12. SusanJuly 13, 2014 at 5:06 AM

    I get the image right down to the sparkle and spritz of first contact. I refer my citrus closer to lunch, but the image is compelling.

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  13. Gen Giggles July 13, 2014 at 5:29 AM

    Very standard morning expressed so differently with a poem. Well done.

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  14. rallentandaJuly 13, 2014 at 7:47 AM

    In winter (now) we have our best juicy local oranges. In summer not so good. We have imported Florida oranges which taste as if they have been in cold storage for many decades possibly since the invention of refrigeration:)

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  15. Sherry Blue SkyJuly 13, 2014 at 8:09 AM

    Orange slices and sleepy glances...yes, a nice start to the day.

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  16. ZQJuly 13, 2014 at 9:36 AM

    Yes! Thank you.
    ZQ

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  17. Gillena CoxJuly 13, 2014 at 1:10 PM

    wow what a sumptuous start to your day, have a good Sunday

    much love...

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  18. The BizzaJuly 13, 2014 at 3:01 PM

    Hmmmm... the Orange as a sunburst. Delicious imagery!

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  19. TruedessaJuly 13, 2014 at 4:19 PM

    orange slices to energize the body..a nice start indeed..

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  20. Myrna R.July 13, 2014 at 6:06 PM

    The picture and your poem make me yearn for oranges. I eat them at any time, though they're wonderful for breakfast.

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  21. kaykualaJuly 15, 2014 at 7:18 AM

    Yes, it opens the day wide open, a great start! Nicely Rallentanda!

    Hank

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  22. J.N.T.July 15, 2014 at 7:51 AM

    I'll say. that's one ideal breakfast experience. orange slices and tea for me. :)

    thanks Rall.

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