Gorgeous song ... gorgeous response :)
Nicely done, Shadorma, and song of tranquility. In the poem itself, there is something disturbing about the "too far from shore to swim it." I hope the narrator stays on the shore.
Yes - the song and video are perfectly echoed in this poem...sigh
Your words add a depth to an already very profound song!
Perfect! :D love the form too :D
The image of home just beyond reach touches me.
A moving write Rall .. and what a song. Bastet
"Just beyond reach" - so poignant, while listening to the clip. That is one very affecting movie.
Very Nice!
Oh I do hope that it is not beyond reach to swim to, Home... The tranquillity of drowning is not really a good tranquillity to aspire to!
Gorgeous song ... gorgeous response :)
ReplyDeleteNicely done, Shadorma, and song of tranquility. In the poem itself, there is something disturbing about the "too far from shore to swim it." I hope the narrator stays on the shore.
ReplyDeleteYes - the song and video are perfectly echoed in this poem...sigh
ReplyDeleteYour words add a depth to an already very profound song!
ReplyDeletePerfect! :D love the form too :D
ReplyDeleteThe image of home just beyond reach touches me.
ReplyDeleteA moving write Rall .. and what a song. Bastet
ReplyDelete"Just beyond reach" - so poignant, while listening to the clip. That is one very affecting movie.
ReplyDeleteVery Nice!
ReplyDeleteOh I do hope that it is not beyond reach to swim to, Home... The tranquillity of drowning is not really a good tranquillity to aspire to!
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