Ah, that unasked dance leaves its mark. You capture the emotion and the nostalgia so well in this compact verse! :-)
Oh....so perfect!
I like that we are invited into the memory, that by the time we get to end we know we would've said yest, too (because most of us have been there, wishing for what never was).
This is potent and to the point RAL. Like that about you!
Oh to have that moment back again!
Oh, those moments that slip by bring a little twinge of pain once in a while.
Ah... what a moment you have captured here.
Ah, that unasked dance leaves its mark. You capture the emotion and the nostalgia so well in this compact verse! :-)
ReplyDeleteOh....so perfect!
ReplyDeleteI like that we are invited into the memory, that by the time we get to end we know we would've said yest, too (because most of us have been there, wishing for what never was).
ReplyDeleteThis is potent and to the point RAL. Like that about you!
ReplyDeleteOh to have that moment back again!
ReplyDeleteOh, those moments that slip by bring a little twinge of pain once in a while.
ReplyDeleteAh... what a moment you have captured here.
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