isn't it clear
the black path i walk
thinking
if the doors of my heart ever close
i am as good as dead
every morning so far i'm, alive
now break the darkness
and burst up into the sky
Landscape by Mary Oliver
Isn’t it plain the sheets of moss, except that
they have no tongues, could lecture
all day if they wanted about
spiritual patience? Isn’t it clear
the black oaks along the path are standing
as though they were the most fragile of flowers?
Every morning I walk like this around
the pond, thinking: if the doors of my heart
ever close, I am as good as dead.
Every morning, so far, I’m alive. And now
the crows break off from the rest of the darkness
and burst up into the sky as though
all night they had thought of what they would like
their lives to be, and imagined
their strong, thick wings.
Pure magic, the way you combined bits and pieces of Ms. Oliver with your poetry.
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