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Tuesday, January 12, 2021

Weekly Scribblings # 52 Erasure poem

 

isn't it clear

the black path i walk

 thinking

if the doors of my heart ever close

i am as good as dead

every morning so far i'm, alive

now break the darkness

and burst up into the sky




 

 

 

 

Landscape by Mary Oliver

 

Isn’t it plain the sheets of moss, except that
they have no tongues, could lecture
all day if they wanted about

spiritual patience? Isn’t it clear
the black oaks along the path are standing
as though they were the most fragile of flowers?

Every morning I walk like this around
the pond, thinking: if the doors of my heart
ever close, I am as good as dead.

Every morning, so far, I’m alive. And now
the crows break off from the rest of the darkness
and burst up into the sky as though

all night they had thought of what they would like
their lives to be, and imagined
their strong, thick wings.

 

 

6 comments:

  1. Pure magic, the way you combined bits and pieces of Ms. Oliver with your poetry.

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  2. Nice one, bravo

    Happy Wednesday

    Much💝love

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  3. Congratulations on your brilliant found poem! I thought of doing something like that but wasn't quite game to tackle the great Oliver in such a way. You not only dared, you produced a result undoubtedly yours whilst absolutely doing justice to your source, and making a wonderful statement too. I dips me lid.

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  4. You had fun putting this one together, I can tell!

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