Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Friday, March 21, 2025

FRIDAY WRITINGS # 169... POETS AND STORYTELLERS UNITED


oh
no john no john no john
NO
far too faded
far too jaded

she took the bait
with silver hooks
sealed her fate
with his good looks
too many wines
too many times
beguiled by words
now not heard
will walk the golden sands alone
romance the sea and write some poems

10 comments:

  1. "Beguiled by words now not heard ... ", rings all too true!

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  2. John Donne is a cunning one. I appreciate your response.

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  3. Ah, an old story!
    I am fascinated to note Donne's response to Marvell, which I had been unaware of. (Have looked up the whole poem now.) Thanks.

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    1. Sorry, the Blogger glitch was active when I posted that. 'Twas me, Rosemary.

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  4. I love the music you shared, listened as I read and continued until it ended. This happened to me ONCE, I learned my lesson. Great response / write, Rall.

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  5. John, the master fisherman, casting poisoned bait to catch a choice fish. You saw through his wily strategy :-)

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  6. As ever insightful and erudite - Jae

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