the scent of miserygrey clouds in the citythe grind of urban existencetick tock
this is just how misery feels 💜💜
Rall, your micro-poem carries weight - rooted in urban despair and entrapment, beautifully executed 🙌
Feelings of misery beautifully described.
Rall, I love this apt description: "the grind of urban existence..." You can feel the misery in this tanka. 💜
I think the scent of misery does smell like an inner city during rush hour. Perfect!
That was excellent, Rall!Yvette M Calleiro :-)http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
So well penned 💞
What a brilliantly selected few words.
this is just how misery feels 💜💜
ReplyDeleteRall, your micro-poem carries weight - rooted in urban despair and entrapment, beautifully executed 🙌
ReplyDeleteFeelings of misery beautifully described.
ReplyDeleteRall, I love this apt description: "the grind of urban existence..." You can feel the misery in this tanka. 💜
ReplyDeleteI think the scent of misery does smell like an inner city during rush hour. Perfect!
ReplyDeleteThat was excellent, Rall!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
So well penned 💞
ReplyDeleteWhat a brilliantly selected few words.
ReplyDelete