do not rupture this
harmonious melody
being a jackass
been a splendid month
like a great day at the beach
full of surprises
poetry jam
up up and away
duck boy is flying so gay
superbird attired
the suit was made to fit him
by a seamstress who sometimes hit 'im
because of his squawkin' and gawkin'
and futile attempts at dawk fawkin'
Glad you are having a good time!! Have a grrrreat day!!
ReplyDeleteLOL! [funny]
ReplyDeleteAs always...Nice.
ReplyDeleteThose little notes in our minds--thank you for the laugh! I'm going to borrow that one, if you don't mind :-)
ReplyDeleteLol ... by pointing out the first one is 5-7-6? Very naughty! It does have harmony, granted. "Prick" would fit.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the second one. Always love days at the beech.
imagine dawk fawking could have that affect...
ReplyDeleteha.
I don't sew:)
ReplyDeleteGlad she only only hit him sometimes.
ReplyDeleteHe likes it:)
DeleteA dawk fawker?
ReplyDeleteA mythical Scottish dodo bird similar to the Lochness Monster!
DeleteMadam, I have never, I repeat, never attempted to fawk a dawk!
DeleteNor a frog either I hope...LOL
DeleteMaybe the occasional frog ...
DeleteRemember:
Dodo's have no form
they travel through space and time
ebbing and flowing
like the tides of the ocean
You have omitted the last line of your tanka
Deleteexcept when it comes to frogs:)
shape-shifting along
DeleteIncluding frogs!
Tsk! Tanka = 57577
DeleteOkay, okay, already ...
DeleteDodo's have no form
they travel through space and time
ebbing and flowing
like the tides of the ocean
rhythmically shifting shape
Not quite 6am where I live and I am giggling!
ReplyDeleteWhat are you doing up so early giggling? It is 11pm and I'm off to bed.
DeleteYou never fail to make me smile and laugh.
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you Tonya!
ReplyDeletelol very humourous I love these.
ReplyDeleteOh, dear!
ReplyDeleteVery funny, nice
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