Rallentanda

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Thursday, July 11, 2013

Haiku Heights




swing low all you like
tis not time - i will come
when the angel calls



i played on a swing
until i was seventeen
a late late bloomer



swing was a dance rage
i missed out on-it sure looks
like really good fun





















hula those hips babe
into a circular swing
drive the guys crazy















up down up and down
and nothing much in between
highs and oh so lows
















ha, swinging couples
suburban bores,dreary twits
thinking they are COOL














22 comments:

  1. Lovely Haiku! Thanks for visiting my brother Ku's blog http://haikubyku.com Me-Ommmm

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  2. If I had to go with the swing, I'd choose the hula hoops.

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  3. So many 'swings.'...I like each one...beautiful..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/ah-swinging-childhoodhaiku.html

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  4. Swing your hips and dance...put on any music today!!

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  5. Great takes on the prompts...
    loved stopping here to read
    what you came up with !
    A lot of fun and cheer.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  6. Never too old to swing! And I love the first haiku.

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  7. Oh I love it! You covered the prompt thoroughly! Impressive haiku =) I was a late bloomer in that same respect and I don't regret it one bit haha

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  8. Happy to have swung into this blog :) Each swing has its own charm :)

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  9. You covered it all!

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  10. Ummm ... the picture with the lass holding the fruit. I mean, that pineapple looks so appealing!

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  11. I still play on a swing - when I'm in the mood.
    Great set!

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  12. You managed to swing right through the challenge...great haiku!

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