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Friday, November 13, 2015

Renga





raindrops on bamboo
shimmer in the sunlight
little diamonds

glistening and winking like
christmas lights for cicadas 

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai   Chevrefeuille


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7 comments:

  1. Kim M. RussellNovember 13, 2015 at 4:35 AM

    I love the idea of Christmas lights for cicadas - it's seasonal, too!

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  2. Carol CampbellNovember 13, 2015 at 5:31 AM

    Perfection!

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  3. AnonymousNovember 13, 2015 at 6:25 AM

    Woah! A beautiful comparison and such a great addition.

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  4. humbirdNovember 13, 2015 at 7:21 AM

    cicadas last line - what a nice idea :)

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  5. Reading PleasureNovember 13, 2015 at 11:19 AM

    Pretty cool. X'mas just around the corner!

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  6. lynn__November 13, 2015 at 12:52 PM

    Lovely idea!

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  7. TournesolDansUnJardinNovember 13, 2015 at 1:38 PM

    Ah yes, for sure all living things should see Christmas lights...lovely response!

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