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Sunday, August 31, 2014

Sunday Afternoon Walk



a beautiful day
spring tomorrow
not sorry winter has left

still too cold to sit
in the rock pool

lovely to wiggle toes
in it just the same

the sea smells so good
the salty breeze fills my lungs
whistles through my ears

for the first time in ages
i am not looking longingly
at  the horizon

i will sleep on the boat
when the weather gets warmer
i say that every year

13 comments:

  1. That old siren the sea continually calls us back like some yearning mother of millennia ago.

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  2. I wish I was in your timezone smiles ~ What a great day to go out, smell the sea and maybe sleep on the boat, ha ~

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  3. nice images... and "i am not looking longingly at the horizon" - that must be a nice feeling.

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  4. This takes me back to the sea I knew as a child--peaceful

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  5. I envy you the smell of the sea....hope this year you do sleep on the boat! So lovely to be lulled to sleep by the waves.

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  6. I like the spacing of this poem, each stanza an exhale of word/thoughts. Together they give a sense of renewed wonder and possibility. Saying this every year, your last stanza, feels more an acceptance than a complaint.

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  7. A minor observation but the equinox is not fo another three weeks . . . regardless the sentiment here is lovely.

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  8. Spring in the southern hemisphere is Sept 1st which is today (your tomorrow )!

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  9. Well, I think it would be great fun to sleep in a boat! I can understand why you would think about that every year. I wish we were facing spring rather than fall....and I'd love to smell that sea breeze.

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  10. the sea is every season's (except for winter) hangout. love the quietness in the springtime, love the noise and hullabaloo in the summer, love the serenity in autumn.

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