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Saturday, October 11, 2014

Carpe Diem


oliana - blog - traces of the soul

Oliana's Tan Renga

power driven fowl
in rays of a setting sun
flies home 

his heart sank at the airport
he did not want her to go

5 comments:

  1. His heart sank...like the setting sun...i like the imagery.

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  2. A sad though but beautifully penned...seeing the sun set and day`s end ...

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  3. Sad ... and so suitable with the sunset hokku.

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  4. That direction is painful ( my tan renga is the other direction)

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  5. Ah! How sad ... to have to let go ...

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