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Sunday, October 26, 2014

Waltz Wave Form


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                                                                      a
                                                              rogue wave
                                                                      is
                                                                breaking

                                                                tsunami
                                                                 roaring
                                                                      in
                                                                  daylight

                                                                destructive
                                                           waltzing monster

                                                                poseidon's
                                                                  children
                                                                     play

                                                                  causing
                                                                  suffering
                                                                  mayhem

                                                                     God
                                                                   hear his
                                                                    prayer

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6 comments:

  1. Donna@LivingFromHappinessOctober 26, 2014 at 10:10 PM

    Quite a powerful sight the image here and powerful words to describe the destruction of water

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  2. Susie ClevengerOctober 26, 2014 at 10:40 PM

    You have captured the strength of the wave and the devastation it brings in such few words...

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  3. brudbergOctober 26, 2014 at 10:46 PM

    I guess with too tsunamic waves only Poseidon''s children with be out to play.

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  4. UnknownOctober 27, 2014 at 2:25 AM

    Great poem on such a destructive wave!

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  5. jazzytowerOctober 28, 2014 at 8:09 PM

    Powerful looking wave..good haiku

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  6. MargaretNovember 3, 2014 at 11:23 AM

    combining waltzing and monster is great - But there IS such a grace and beauty about the large powerful storms.

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