Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Bush Grave





far from the madding crowd
here in the mudgee bush
surrounded by scribbly gums
shading the graves from the sun
no one has visited in a long time

peaceful and overgrown
nothing clipped or trimmed
the trees forever watch over
the sleeping spirits

i am reminded that no matter
how  intensely gifted we are
this is our end
to rot and dissipate to dust

and in this silent serenity
i am also reminded
of how short our stay is
of what really matters
of how hard it is to find
of how intent you were
on throwing it away
of how we are now
already dead to each other

15 comments:

  1. Your ending is indeed powerful, gaspingly so!

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  2. It's sad when that eerie emptiness of the graveyard settles in between two hearts...powerfully expressed....

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  3. The mudgee bushes and scribbly gums make it sound like a magical place but reality creeps into the ending like a thud...in a good way poetically mind!

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  4. strong reminders to those of us who still live to do more than go through the motions of living... and how sadly true the last lines ring

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  5. I have visited some graveyards that look like this--neglected and overgrown--old family cemeteries in rural areas. They are quite sad.

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  6. There is a morbid curiosity in visiting old graveyards. I like to think as we do that the worn words speak to us saying "don't waste you time here for there is so much to do".

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  7. I love graveyards and the inspiration they provide. Also, please tell me they are really called scribbly gums :D

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  8. beautiful powerful piece!

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  9. As we speak we are hurtling 4ward to a death we know not .... It can happen just like that so unexpectantly

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  10. powerful message, we all know our end but did nothing to make it better

    Nature's Plan

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  11. Poignant and powerful, Rall. The realisation of the finality and inevitability of death still hasn't dawned on many people up until the moment they die, which explains why the live wasting their lives...

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