
if i were you
i would explore
the possibility
of being someone else
start
by reading the above book
if i were you
i would explore
the concept of ethics
by adopting a moral code
not too supple or flexible
one that has defined boundaries

if i were you
i would explore reasons
for not using
your professional training
to exploit the vulnerabilities
of potential victims to feed
your arrogance and narcissism

if i were you
i would explore other ways of using your technical prowess
instead of gathering private and personal information
on internet users who spark your interest
recognise your crude portrayal of women
as misogyny and face your demons
if i were you
i would not write a poem like this
for fear of toppling the apple cart
and having it fall on me
maybe if i were you
everything would be easier
but then i wouldn't be me
That's the problem--or perhaps the solution--not needing to be the one who says "If I were you" or needing to be the one spoken to. No one knows what he or she would o if me! Neat poem.
ReplyDeleteOr maybe people should just be people and let other people be people and we'd all get along.... well, in my dreams anyway :)
ReplyDeletethe last three lines utter the ultimate truth...nice thought provoking lines...
ReplyDeleteHa! Loved that ending!
ReplyDeleteAnd I for one would never want you to change ;)
ReplyDeleteThere are very few certainties in life. One is...I will never change . People who have known me since I was a child say you have not changed...Terrifying isn't it...to think a child could have been like this (giggles)
DeleteTerrific not terrible ;)
Deletethe dilemma of being opened wide remains thus as you end your poem; nice read
ReplyDeletehave a good Wednesday
much love...
you should always be yourself good advice! love your poem
ReplyDeleteInteresting and thought-provoking combination of the two prompts.
ReplyDeleteTruthful realistic suggestions- new ways to discover problems of the world
ReplyDeleteI’d be remiss to state I’ve been guilty of the same sin on occasions in my younger days. I guess I’m proud now since I’ve been able to replace the bile with saner juices to some extent with age. This post is a great reality check for each one of us to snap out of it., Rallentanda! :)
ReplyDeleteA thought-provoking poem, which addresses some serious issues, eg cyber bullying and the portrayal of women........thanks for being a voice on these important topics!
ReplyDeleteNot being someone else is always problematic, isn't it? Or maybe it's not...
ReplyDeleteSounds like quite a despicable person--much better to be yourself.
ReplyDeleteThere are a number of despicable types represented in this poem...not just one person.
DeleteGreat write. I like your strong voice here. The ending of this poem is very clever.
ReplyDeleteLiving with others is often fraught with difficulties but living with yourself even worse!
ReplyDeleteI am sorry to hear that oldegg...you should sort that out !
DeleteYou took the challenge and turned it upside down! I love this "if I were you" approach!
ReplyDeleteI can tell you mean what you say, smiles ~
ReplyDeleteDang psychopaths - they're everywhere. They say there's one in every 100 people, but I have come to believe that there are more of them out there than that. And yes, I think they do have an easier time of it than decent, empathic human beings. Though I have noticed that, having lived their lives totally absorbed in themselves (and having done their level best to stir up mayhem for others) they are miserable human beings - at the end.
ReplyDeleteI really like the fourth stanza. Such people need to be reminded they are being fools.
ReplyDeleteHeartening to hear that from a man ( a real one !:)
DeleteThanks for your comment at my blog, Rallentanda....you are so right about abuse of animals. Thanks for advocating on their behalf. I look forward to the photos of the blessing of the animals!
ReplyDeleteLiked this lovely denouncement ... I like the strength behind your words ... the lilt and cadence combined with the repetitions makes it easy to follow and there seems to even be humor behind the anger ... bravo.
ReplyDeleteOh Georgia for me this is extremely mild...a mere flutter flapping and beating of the wings..Sardonic quips rather than anger I would say.
ReplyDeleteHappy Jack trusts you do not believe one of these 'types' is closely known to him.
DeleteSilly Billy ...of course not! Still no news? Cannot be long now !
DeleteOver 24 hours in labour ... am climbing the walls .... poor daughter ......
DeleteA baby girl ........ born at 00:30 UK time ..... complicated delivery ... but my daughter and baby both well .... thank God .... now having my first whiskey in 24 hours ...... so relieved ............ so joyful .........
DeleteCongratulations on becoming a Grandpa! Will make contact soon Pops !
DeleteIt is sad that with the internet we have opened another portal for stalking and abuse - please upset the apple cart!
ReplyDeleteLove how you build up to that last important line. :-)
ReplyDeletewhy be something else when yourself is so wonderful,
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Chortles !
DeleteLoved it.
ReplyDeleteVery effective poem, Rall. It is good to be able to look at the world critically and be able to make decisions that are right by one's own conscience and own viewpoint fo the world. We should be thankful that we live in a country where we can still speak our mind like this with impunity.
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