frere iacques
dormez - vous
night cap coming up
her kisses
stained with cherry brandy
combo carnal cocktail
on the road
those who wander
can get lost
sun ray peeks
through darkened curtain
awaking a hangover
hitching a ride
on a freight train
to nowhere
hot summer night
tickling his thigh
a false eyelash
Ha. I love the last one. They're all good. Frere Jacques needs a night cap - that's funny too. Good writing.
ReplyDeleteAh, these are wonderful. The third one is my favorite
ReplyDeleteOkay, you really captured Jack here! The last one really made me smile -- but I think Jack would have approved of the whole batch.
ReplyDeleteBravo! :)
This is excellent - the false eyelashes tickling - really cool
ReplyDeleteBeautifully atmospheric. I first read the book in the 1960's and loved every word.
ReplyDeleteThis is so cool!!love how you started it with our old song and that last line is epic...I enjoyed reading this ...sure Jack would have been proud avec un grand sourire!
ReplyDeleteOh - I did not read them as separate at all - but rather of one piece which was wonderfully sensually, powerful
ReplyDeletei picture Jacque the traveler in this.
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This is great!
ReplyDeleteYou have captured the spirit of the man with your words.......very cool!
ReplyDeleteLiterary inspiration is always great. Well written.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this poem in the spirit of On The Road. You provide form which increases the power of a moment.
ReplyDeletethis poem is sensually lightweighted. i'm walking on air! lol
ReplyDeleteAwesome!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Care to give a reason? or are you just having another bad hair day ?
ReplyDeleteThe third and fifth are simple, common, but still amazing. I love them.
ReplyDeleteGreat series ...
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