Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, January 15, 2014

3WW : Poetry Jam




now i am no longer devoted to you
i need not be anxious about
not having a scrawny arse
i can now unchain the refrigerator
eat as many berries as i like

23 comments:

  1. 5 Berries! Not sure your arse will grow that fast with 5 berries. Why not go a little crazy with revenge. Perhaps 6? or 7?

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  2. I wish I had a scrawny arse but alas it is not so. 100 berries sounds about right, well because I need to have some of all the different kinds of berries. Love the sentiment of the poem.

    God bless.

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  3. trying to live up to the expectations of others can be so tiring.

    FREEDOM!

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  4. I need a few more berries than that to get my arse to grow! LOL Maybe go real crazy and eat a whole bowl!! Berries are healthy right? LOL

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  5. The wonders of not being bound by what others think. How liberating!

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  6. If she wouldn't let you eat berries, perhaps her leaving is for the best. Berries are too good!

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  7. Thanks for the smile, I needed that.

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  8. other's expectations are always hard to bound by sometimes we just have to be set free from them.

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  9. Being set free! Love it! Blessings

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  10. short and sweet the sentiment is one that rings true to my heart!!

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  11. Yes eat the whole box!! I like short pieces like this that say much in few words!

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  12. Now THERE is reason for celebration!! Yay!

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  13. Don't be fooled by advertisers, some men still appreciate a rounded arse! Next you will be telling me you like Pete Campbell.

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    1. Well that is good news oldegg. All the gels with rounded bottoms will be pleased that you still appreciate a rood rounded arse...LOL

      Pete Campbell is definitely not my type.

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  14. Oh no..my comment got eaten by cyberspace..I think the gist was reaching for chocolate..

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  15. Don't wanna burst your bubble, berries aren't going to go straight to your arse ... ice cream, YES.

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    1. Been eating a lot of cold rock melon and ice cream in this weather Helen.

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  16. oh yeah ! Stay cool and have another berry or two!

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  17. A berry good poem! ;-) Thank you for the smiles--okay, there was a snicker in there too, can't read scrawny arse without a laugh...

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  18. LOLLL, yes indeed. Eat it all up and then look for someone who appreciates the Rubenesque figure :-)

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    1. Rubenesque lovers are hard to come by...so I had better put the chain back on the fridge:) Glad you enjoyed this one !

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