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Friday, January 31, 2014

Haiku Heights






 

a perfect cadence
to our song, not much to ask
a cuppa and a laugh





a two chord ending
perfect imperfect plagal
musician's jargon




guy wearing sarong
poetic inspiration
on a sandy beach

a perfect ending
to a Sunday afternoon
in the summertime




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14 comments:

  1. J Cosmo NewberyFebruary 1, 2014 at 10:37 PM

    Nicely done, skillfully done, discretely done.

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  2. Vandana SharmaFebruary 2, 2014 at 4:12 AM

    sunday-a time for leisure and relaxing

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  3. LauraFebruary 2, 2014 at 5:48 AM

    Lovely series.

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  4. PanchaliFebruary 2, 2014 at 8:37 AM

    I agree with Cosmo...very well crafted!! :)

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  5. anthonynorthFebruary 2, 2014 at 9:18 AM

    Enjoyed them, especially the first, but neutral on the third :-)

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  6. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 2, 2014 at 9:31 AM

    Oh I liked this escape from winter into summer's heat - if only while reading this poem!

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  7. revelationsFebruary 2, 2014 at 10:38 AM

    there is a touch of gaiety in this which is uplifting... being in the middle of winter here both the pictures and the poem were refreshing ...

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  8. The Way of DodoFebruary 2, 2014 at 12:44 PM

    Alizee in a sarong would be perfect.

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  9. brudbergFebruary 2, 2014 at 1:14 PM

    Ah.. could I have a woman on the beach instead... my winter soul longs for warmth

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  10. Myrna R.February 2, 2014 at 1:44 PM

    Nice. It felt like a little trip into summer. (The picture of that guy helped my dreaming.)

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  11. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerFebruary 2, 2014 at 2:02 PM

    ti-do-re-do

    you must be a musician!

    Lovely!

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  12. kaykualaFebruary 2, 2014 at 4:23 PM

    What a lovely day it is! Nicely Rallentanda!

    Hank

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  13. Bing YapFebruary 2, 2014 at 8:28 PM

    I like the guy wearing sarong. Poetic inspiration indeed. :)

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